The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.

The diagram gives information about the steps involved in making coffee and preparing it for consumption in supermarkets and shops.
In general, there are eleven steps in total, starting with the collection of coffee, and ending with the coffee being packaged. It can be seen that the production of coffee is both by hand and by machines.
At the beginning of the process, farmers start picking the coffee beans out of the coffee trees by hand before these beans are dried in a large space at a hot temperature. The next step is that coffee beans are roasted in the roaster to peel off the seeds, and then cooled in the cooled machines. After being put in the grinder, where coffee beans become ground coffee mixed with hot water. This mixture is strained and dried.
Then, the frozen mixture is ground again and put in the vacuum. The ground coffee undergoes a process of evaporation to let the water evaporate, leaving only the ground coffee. Finally, the coffee is packaged in various containers and sold to retailers, supermarkets, or shops.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, then, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83888888889 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5247601035 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7615288039 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1633544551 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647966741072 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717425815522 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11791397203 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870605428128 0.0819641961636 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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