The picture describes the process of manufacturing coffee powder for market from raw coffee beans.
It is clear that the process comprises a number of steps, beginning with collecting raw coffee beans and ending with packing coffee powder.
At the beginning of the process, coffee beans are collected by hand to select standard beans. Then, people dry them by the sunlight after which dried beans are roasted in specialized roaster. Next, roasted beans are rapidly cooled. Following this, cooled beans are grinded into powder by grinder. This powder is mixed with hot water into a mixture.
The process continues with the above mixture being strained by a filter grid to remove desposition. Next, strained liquid is freezed after which freezed liquid is grinded into powder, which containing moisture. Once this stage is completed, moisture powder is dried in a specialized vacuum to remove all vapour so as to against mold and ensure quality of coffee. Finally, standard powder coffee is packed into jars by machine to be readily marketable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 311, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...specialized vacuum to remove all vapour so as to against mold and ensure quality of coff...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20118343195 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48784025058 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585798816568 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1766816651 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9090909091 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0663696462912 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285234818387 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440343663705 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631450644249 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503779055699 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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