The process illustrates how to produce coffee in order to sell in stores or supermarkets.
In general, it is evident that the lengthy process of manufacturing coffee contains 11 stages, beginning from harvesting and culminating in packaging.
As can be seen from the diagram, at the first stage, coffee beans are harvested manually. Prior to being roasted, the coffee beans are exposed in grounds in order to dry. Coffee is cold in a short time, after which people grind them. Subsequently, having been added to high-temperature water, the mixture is stained.
Look at the process in more detail, in the following stage, the mixture is frozen. It is then crushed by a special machine. After that, it is very important that the coffee is passed to a vacuum so as to dry. The final step is when the coffee is packed into jars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...t that the coffee is passed to a vacuum so as to dry. The final step is when the coffee ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, so, then, as to, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84615384615 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78725503855 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608391608392 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6976533302 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145942423188 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540326493371 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514672127149 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941023223421 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530795566228 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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