It is universally acknowledged that in order to reduce the incidence of crime, people who commit offences should be kept in prison for a long time. However, I hold a firm conviction that even giving longer terms in jails is an effective measure, there are several steps to tackle with the rampant of the crime rate.
On the one hand, there are a couple of reasons why I believe the governments should pass new legislation to keep offenders in jails for a long time. One of the significant reasons is that the authorities can impose strict laws like expanding time in prisons, therefore, citizens may avoid to commit a crime. Indeed, when someone decides to break laws, they may about consequences, so this law may deter them from doing illegal actions. Another reason is that to uphold an order society, convicts should be kept in prisons for a long time. If the authorities do not keep offenders in jails for a long time to train them to know about moral obligations, the persistent offender rate may increase rapidly. As a result, the number of innocent victims will climb because the rules and regulations in these countries cannot safeguard their security.
On the other hand, for a variety of reasons, I believe that some other measures can be applied to reality so as to deal with the soaring criminal rate. First of all, educating about laws, illegal activities and consequences should be high on the government’ agenda. Instead of spending expenditure on building more prisons to keep convicts, the governments may allocate more money to teach their residents, especially students, how to become law-abiding citizens. Therefore, the local people can gain up-scale awareness about their rights and duties, in the long term, the rate of juvenile delinquency will drop. Secondly, the government can improve the living standard of their residents to deter them from breaking laws. According to some research, hunger and poverty are the culprits of the rampant crime rate, hence, if the authorities accommodate more welfare for their citizens, they can face with these problems.
In conclusion, I believe that in order to safeguard social stability, the governments should not only keep prisoners for longer terms in jails but also enhance their locals’ awareness about laws as well as improve the standard of living.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 283, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid committing'.
Suggestion: avoid committing
...ime in prisons, therefore, citizens may avoid to commit a crime. Indeed, when someone decides t...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ther measures can be applied to reality so as to deal with the soaring criminal rate. Fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06753246753 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76675929402 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527272727273 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.3104328304 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.066666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194767346583 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683001895824 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509014258404 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134651277015 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535793122014 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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