the diagram below shows how coffee is prodused and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops
The given diagram illustrates the process of coffee production and its preparation for sale in supermarkets and shops. Overall, coffee production is labor-intense and linear process, which includes several repetitive stages.
First step is picking the coffee beans. after beans having been picked, it is necessary to dry them by the sun and roost. Next stage is cooling beans, this process going rapidly. following this, beans are grained and mixed with hot water. after being mixed, the mixture is grained followed by this stage the mixture set into freezing period. The process continues with grinding the frozen liquid before using a vacuum as a tool to dry it. Finally, liquid is packed into jars and this coffee can be sale in supermarkets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...First step is picking the coffee beans. after beans having been picked, it is necessa...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Following
...ling beans, this process going rapidly. following this, beans are grained and mixed with ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...s are grained and mixed with hot water. after being mixed, the mixture is grained fol...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 627.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 122.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1393442623 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.32345618554 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56651635123 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680327868852 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 189.0 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6746733752 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.6666666667 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5555555556 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148214961053 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641259072662 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109425420168 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147101359979 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100156601852 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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