The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
The pictorial expression shows the mechanism of generating electricity in a hydroelectric power station.
According to the flow chart, high currents of water from the river are channeled from a high level reservoir into a dam.The intake of water is opened during the day but closed at night.From the dam ,water flows into the reversible turbines to generate electricity during the day.However, at night, water,flows back into the dam during the pumping process.The reversible turbines operates the generator during the day and pumps water into low level reservoir to the bigh level reservior.
It is notable that the reversible turbines and the generator basically makes up the power station.Electricity is generated by the generator and is supplied via the power lines into the National grid.
Conclusively, the process of electricity generation is complex, utilizing natural resource in its simplest form as the main raw material.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... from a high level reservoir into a dam.The intake of water is opened during the da...
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Suggestion: From
...ened during the day but closed at night.From the dam ,water flows into the reversibl...
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the day but closed at night.From the dam ,water flows into the reversible turbines...
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Suggestion: However
... to generate electricity during the day.However, at night, water,flows back into the ...
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Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ricity during the day.However, at night, water,flows back into the dam during the...
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , flows
...uring the day.However, at night, water,flows back into the dam during the pumping pr...
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Suggestion: The
...into the dam during the pumping process.The reversible turbines operates the genera...
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Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'operate'.
Suggestion: operate
...pumping process.The reversible turbines operates the generator during the day and pumps ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...reservoir to the bigh level reservior. It is notable that the reversible turbin...
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Line 4, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Electricity
...or basically makes up the power station.Electricity is generated by the generator and is s...
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Line 4, column 152, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ity is generated by the generator and is supplied via the power lines into the Na...
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... power lines into the National grid. Conclusively, the process of electricity...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48275862069 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16573509881 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579310344828 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.631749644 43.030603864 352% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 198.75 112.824112599 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.25 22.9334400587 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170792068389 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16705704508 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108355923122 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16705704508 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108355923122 0.0819641961636 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 13.2329268293 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.02 61.2550243902 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.3012195122 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.