The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

THE FLOW CHART DESCRIBES THE PROCESS OF PRODUCING ETHANOL FUEL FROM CORN. THE FOLLOWING PARAGRAPH WILL EXPLAIN THE STEP BY STEP PROCEDURE.

FIRSTLY, WE NEED TO COLLECT THE CORN AND STORE IT AND THEN CORN HAVE TO PASS THROUGH THE PROCESS OF MILLING. AFTER THAT CORN SHOULD BE COOKED FOR 4 HOURS WITH ADDITION OF WATER AND THEN IT WILL remain IN THE PROCESS CALLED FERMENTING FOR 48 HOURS.

AFTER THE FERMENTING PROCESS, THE LIQUID AND SOLID BY-PRODUCT SHOULD BE SEPARATED. MOREOVER, AFTER SEPARATING THE LIQUID WILL HAVE TO GO THROUGH THE PURIFYING PROCESS FOR CONTINUOUSLY FIVE HOURS WHICH WILL LEAD TO ETHANOL. THEN, WE CAN STORE IT FOR THE MARKET. AT LAST, IT WILL BE PASS TO THE RETAILERS WITH THE HELP OF TRANSPORTATION AND THEN THE CUSTOMERS WILL ABLE TO BUY THE ETHANOL FUEL WHICH IS PRODUCED FROM CORN. SO, THIS IS THE STEP BY STEP PROCEDURE FOR THE ETHANOL OIL PRODUCED FORM CORN.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...OOKED FOR 4 HOURS WITH ADDITION OF WATER AND THEN IT WILL remain IN THE PROCESS...
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Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...OURS WITH ADDITION OF WATER AND THEN IT WILL remain IN THE PROCESS CALLED FERME...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ITH ADDITION OF WATER AND THEN IT WILL remain IN THE PROCESS CALLED FERMENTING ...
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Line 5, column 468, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...IS IS THE STEP BY STEP PROCEDURE FOR THE ETHANOL OIL PRODUCED FORM CORN.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46723266335 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519230769231 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6867763799 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3333333333 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131796750512 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676920258573 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781836232718 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109368795476 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417039558747 0.0819641961636 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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