The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

The given diagram provides information on the manufacturing process of ethanol fuel from corn.

From an overall perspective, it is evident that there are 9 main stages to producing the ethanol fuel, beginning with assembling corn in the factory and ending with transporting final goods to the retailers.

According to the data in an image, a manufacturer commences with gathering and delivering corns to the storage houses in order to store this raw material. Next, the stored corns come into a milling and powdering step. Following that, the cornflour started to be cooked for 4 hours, and the water is added during the cooking period. After the fourth step, the mixture is fermented for 48 hours so as to ensure create an enzyme for a product.

Moving to the sixth step, after 48 hours of fermenting, the cocktail of these ingredients is separated and continues to go into purifying step. These mixtures can be added with liquid or solid by-products by employees to join in this step. During 5 hours of purifying, the ethanol from corns was finally produced and stored in the warehouse. Consequently, the final product will be transported to the stockholders or retailers in order to be published to the market.

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Average: 9.2 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
..., the mixture is fermented for 48 hours so as to ensure create an enzyme for a product. ...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, if, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99509803922 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84929606772 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0642877248 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.9 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208353468641 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093989319083 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126575377659 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178300519667 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123497640769 0.0819641961636 151% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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