The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by reporting and selecting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram given illustrates the detailed process of manufacturing instant noodles.
In general, there are eight different steps from the first step of collecting and storing raw ingredients to the final step which noodles are labeled and sealed before delivery.
Regarding the picture, receiving flour from a container and storage silos is the initial step of the manufacturing chain. Then the flour is mixed with water and oil in the mixer, the mixture then passes the rollers to form dough sheets, which is the second and the third stage.
In the fourth step, dough strips are cut by the machine from the sheets into small, thin, and long fibers before it is curled into noodles discs. After that, the curly noodles are cooked and dried with oil, followed by the supplement of vegetables and spices into a noodle cup. The noodles cups are labeled and sealed, which is the completed step to be consumed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 291, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'cup'.
Suggestion: cup
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, second, then, third, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39778387592 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4011841557 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0902324597932 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497331034218 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450784700623 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660600652386 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521293433494 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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