The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
The diagram illustrates the way in which instant noodles are made. Overall, manufacturing process consists of eight parts that begins with storing floor to storage silos and finishing up with labeling and sealing cups.
The first stage includes in pouring floor into storage silos from truck so as to make it ready to be mixed with water and oil in a mixer apparatus. After completing this process, the ready mixture is passed through a machine like rolling pins in order to make a dough sheets and then to dough strips where they are cut apart into pieces.
At the fifth stage, separated strips are put into noodles discs, and then they are cooked with oil and as well as dried. Next stage is pouring dried noodles into cups with the combination of vegetables plus spices. And finally, the manufacturing process completes with labeling and sealing the instant noodles filled cups.
- As languages such as English Spanish and Mandarin become more widely spoken there is a fear that many minority languages may die out Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages What is your view of this practice
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- Some people work for the same organisation all their working life Others think that it is better to work for different organisations Discuss both these viewas and give your own opinion 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ing floor into storage silos from truck so as to make it ready to be mixed with water an...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, then, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37112256584 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606666666667 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0026851898 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.428571429 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144937802284 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912266530311 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995473182995 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111206349424 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794343489254 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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