The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram represents information about the process by which instant noodles are produced.
Overall, it is obvious that there are eight main stages in the process of manufacturing instant noodles, commencing with storing raw ingredients and culminating in noodles being packaged for later consumption. However, only five main steps are used to make cups of noodles, excluding the storage of flour and the occurrence of the conveyor.
At the first stage of the instant noodles-producing process, flour is taken from a truck into two tower silos for storage before putting it into a mixing machine, where is mixed with water and oil. At the following stage, this mixture is put through a roller, and then it is transferred to the sheets of dough before being cut into noodles by strips. Before being cooked and left to dry at a suitable temperature, these noodles are pressed into well-shaped circular discs.
The process concludes with the two steps which involve packaging the noodles. Firstly, vegetables and spices are put into these available cups for adding flavor. Finally, the process finishes with a step being labeled and sealed and then the factory will transform these products to agents, markets, and supermarkets for servicing customer needs.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25247524752 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74914767874 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589108910891 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.306982754 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.888888889 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124131200031 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577108569986 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624166341737 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995296599483 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737421949745 0.0819641961636 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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