The diagram below shows how Olive Oil is manufactured.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below
The diagram depicts the procedure of producing Olive Oil.
Overall, this is a step-by-step process that is comprised of 7 stages, from harvesting the olive fruits from the trees to storing for sale in the shop.
Initially, the ripen fruits are picked from the trees and collected in some box, then, it is washed and rinsed properly from the cold water. After the previous step, the washed olives are put on the conveyor belt to pass it for smashing where the fruits are crushed and separated from their seeds.
Once the smashing step is performed the wet olives turn into the paste which is stuffed into the bags having holes before pressing them. As soon as the bags filled with pastes are pressed, the oil is then extracted in the next step called Extraction where oil and water are separated from each other. At last, the final product is delivered to the warehouse or shops in order to store or sell them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: IS_COMPRISED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of' or 'is composed of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of; is composed of
...ll, this is a step-by-step process that is comprised of 7 stages, from harvesting the olive fru...
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Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ing for sale in the shop. Initially, the ripen fruits are picked from the trees and co...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...shed and separated from their seeds. Once the smashing step is performed the wet ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67283950617 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23457642724 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3466795485 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.142857143 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 5.23603664747 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0934818227856 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543686655942 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570441364271 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813209397047 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581092253274 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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