WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor.
What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
There is no doubt that in every country there are a few rich and underprivileged people. There are various strategies for dealing with the population, especially the under-poverty ones in every nation. In this essay, I will scrutinize the causes of poorness worldwide and suggest some solutions to it along with relevant examples.
To start with, Inflation Is the substantial reason behind poverty worldwide. There is an invisible gap between rich and poor and due to inflation the rich become richer while the poor become poorer. Another reason is the lack of education where education is undervalued in certain parts of the world. For instance, the kids of farmers are not sent to school instead they are encouraged to team up in hereditary occupations. Besides, there are a plethora of job opportunities available but only with educational criteria where uneducated youths are discouraged from dreaming about it. To exemplify, the studies say that 10% of girl children are suppressed since their childhood and are not unallowed to get educated in underdeveloping nations.
However, this can be overcome and the poor people can be ridden by poverty. The governments of each country should focus on key areas. Firstly, the government and other organizations should make people understand the importance of education and finances. Although the government can efficiently work on targetted groups, each civilian should be encouraged if they get a chance. Besides, the opportunities should be available strategically by providing training and sessions. For example, the tribal communities are trained in order to given opportunities in the tourism industry. While it is a slow process, it is possible and gradual enough to achieve the success. United Nations could look upon social issues thoroughly.
To conclude, Despite having poverty in every country, the reasons like lack of education and opportunities should be worked upon together as a whole world. Also, globalization has opened a gateway for an individual to deal their way with the poor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, while, for example, for instance, no doubt, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3487654321 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03859709756 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586419753086 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0526776661 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2105263158 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0526315789 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297007156169 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772176635861 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599269676077 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181660027117 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467031649818 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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