The diagram below shows how potato chips are made Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words

The given diagram illustrates the stages and steps in the potato chip-making process.

Overall, it is clear that there are 3 stages in the production of potato chips. The process begins with checking quality and ends with packaging products.

At the first stage in the production of potato chips, potatoes are checked and then washed by a washer and go through cold rinse water. The next stage is pre-made. First, the potatoes are sent to a peeler where they are peeled and starched. Then, these potatoes are treated by the use of a bucket conveyor and put into a slicer. The other way is to send potatoes right away to the slicer by cold rinse water. After being sliced, they go through a flatbed conveyor with air above to dry them.

The third stage is cooking. The process continues with potatoes being fried. After that, they are added with salter to make them delicious. Finally, the potato chips are packaged in bags or cans.

Votes
Average: 6.9 (25 votes)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, then, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28269587898 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1253936791 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.9230769231 112.824112599 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6153846154 22.9334400587 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133807207837 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535728426297 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457681312826 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956948894457 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510091773644 0.0819641961636 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.2329268293 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 61.2550243902 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.38 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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