The diagram depicts the circulation of Earth's water by water cycle.
Overall, the water cycle has three main steps including evaporation, clouds formation and rain. The poured down water goes into atmosphere again and cycle continues.
To begin, sun heat triggers evaporation. In this process, massive amount of water from water bodies like rivers, lakes and seas is converted into vapours. Also, different flora of earth contributes to vapour formation in atmosphere by transpiration. These water vapours are condensed by low temperature and wind converting into clouds. Moreover, air currents move clouds around the globe where further fall in temperature precipitates them.
As a result of precipitation, rain pours down and water is absorbed by huge porous rocks underneath surface of earth. Subsequently, these rock return water to rivers and lakes from where it is streamed into sea as well as evaporated again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...water bodies like rivers, lakes and seas is converted into vapours. Also, differe...
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Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re condensed by low temperature and wind converting into clouds. Moreover, air cu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44055944056 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.860729674 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685314685315 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4624201583 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.8 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187340562707 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793732962181 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07385084991 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143779917585 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725751033967 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.68 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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