The overall world's population has exponentially increased in recent times. Since it is root of all other problems faced by us, scientists are worried that, if not taken care of, it can lead to extinction of humanity. The main factors responsible for this dilemma include hesitation to use birth control and lack of awarness about results of such development.
In current times, humanity is struck by many challanges like climate change, femines and terrorism etc. All of these problems have their own impacts on mankind but they have one thing in common; they are all due to poor population control. This is largely self-inflicted because humans have never actively tried to eliminate the problem of excessive births. It is understandable that procreating is an evolutionary instinct but not keeping strict checks on the outcome of over population has been careless at our part. Hence, humanity is reaping what it has sown in last centuries in form of population bomb becoming the biggest challange at hand.
One important reason of this problem is strong stigmas attached with the use of contraceptive options. This problem is especially prevalant in third world countries where primitive concepts about fertility are rampant. Since a lot of importance is given to child bearing and rearing in such countries, birth control is largely avoided. This results in increase in average number of kids per couple and eventually populates the planet massively. For example, countries where rate of birth control use is low, average number of children per women is more than five. Moreover, in many cultures, contraception is still a taboo subject and not talked about frequently. As young couples are mostly unaware of their options, they end up having unwanted pregnancies and contribute to the problem of overpopulation.
Another reason is lack of awareness about the outcomes of a populated planet. Many people still don't believe in climate change and consider it a conspiracy designed to guilt them for using plastic. Similarly, majority of masses considers the threat of increased population mere propaganda to stop them from having kids. Others do not have a clue about it altogether. This ignorant approach is significantly damaging any chances we have to save humanity by controlling population problem and other resultant issues.
To conclude, overpopulation has become the most important issue of current era and ignorance about birth control and effects of this problem on nature is responsible for it. Therefore, unless awareness about its damaging impacts is ensured, it is impossible to address the issue effectively.
- Some people work for the same organisation all their working life Others think that it is better to work for different organisations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 72
- In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- The diagram below shows how the water cycle works. 56
- 7.Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree? 84
- The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
The overall worlds population has exponentially increased ...
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Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...f a populated planet. Many people still dont believe in climate change and consider ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, still, therefore, third, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2211.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 418.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28947368421 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90456337589 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581339712919 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1397413158 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.5 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181871620274 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523609001357 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425865158698 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994702729321 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389154484265 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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