The diagram below shows information about member attendance at various clubs in a metro city
The provided bar graph illustrates the number of visitors at different clubs from January to july in a metro city.
Overall, it is clear that American club observed the highest attendance in the given time period, while, least number of people visited in Japanese club.
As can be seen from the graph that the number of visits to American club had been almost constant in the first four months, amounting to around 80000. While, in the june attendance rose to near 95000 and fell down in the july. However, lowest visitors noticed in Japanese club they were below 40000 in the initial year, then increased gradually and reduced at about 50000 in April. After that, the visits decreased and remained steady at about 43000.
With regards to British club and French club, with 62000 visitors British was ahead of French club. In contrast, attendance of French club increased sharply in June and it reached above 85000 in july, while, the French club accounted for nearly 62000.
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The bar chart given…
The bar chart given information the number of visitor in metro city different typs of clubs
Overall,the highest visit in June month in American club and the lowest visitor in January in Japanise club
To begin with the January month in four different types of city to visitor visit clubs and the highest visit in American club and the lowest visit in Japanese club ,but the British club and French club is minimum same number of visitor visit in clubs and February month British and French club same visitor visit in club and American club the 1000 visitor is mainas for January months but Japanese club visitor is incres in February month and the March month American and British clubs same visitors and french and Japanese club slatly incresed in March month
Moreover, the American club is 81000 visitor people visit in this club but franch and British is minimum same visitor in April month but Japanese is greduat incred in all four month but Japanese is greduat decreas in May month and the American club is greduat incres and British club and Franch club same visitor in May month but June month Franch club visitor is best between British club and Japanese is same visitor more than May month but Franch club is repedly incres in July month and American club is repedly decreas in all six months in this month and British is gradually increse in July month and Japanese is same visitor visit in July month.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the least'.
Suggestion: , the least
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Line 9, column 235, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the lowest'.
Suggestion: , the lowest
...95000 and fell down in the july. However, lowest visitors noticed in Japanese club they ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, then, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98192771084 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23138905423 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60843373494 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1137802068 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.375 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226669121713 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986485135771 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362100729657 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134523470116 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02281374779 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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