Some people say taxes should be spent on health care. Other people say that there are more important priorities for tax payers money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
A small section of society believe that tax must spend on medical facilities while, opponents consider that this money should be spend on some other important priorities. However, in my opinion, although health care is a significant field for spend tax payers money but, education and infrastructure are equally important.
To begin with those who advocate with the first notion claim that health care should be considered as the most impartial in the case of spending tax money. In other words, people who are under the poverty cannot afford expense for their treatments. For example, diseases such as cancer and heart attacks are very common nowadays as these costly diseases cannot be cured by the poor people who may lead to spreading disease in the whole society. Moreover, it is also moral duty of higher authorities to invest on the providing more medical equipments to the hospitals and medical centers for the remedy of health hassles of people.
On the other hand, other areas of improvements are as important as health care. For example, tax invest on the building more schools and providing education facilities will definitely make the future generation more productive and creative. Apart from this, infrastructure also the significant factor which can lead to boost the economy of a nation. Therefore, tax should expenditure on making more highways and broad the narrow roads.
In conclusion, it is clear from the above discussion that health is an important field of invest tax payers money for the sake of whole society health. However, in my opinion, other priorities such as infrastructure and education are equally important
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
Suggestion: spent
...ents consider that this money should be spend on some other important priorities. How...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21722846442 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72181332115 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531835205993 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1191200764 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.083333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3654054627 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130123163345 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616455651047 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227488008395 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340804359556 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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