The given bar graph provides information about a visit of members in four different clubs in a metro city. The data is calibrated in thousands.
It is seen from the graph that the number of visits to a French club had almost the same in the first six months, which is noted around 60000. But, in July, they increased and reached up to 78000.The most regularity is seen in the British club which is again in the range of 60000.
Japanese club observed nearly 39000 visitors in January and then letter he increased and reach up to 47000 in April. Afterward, the visits decreased and stand out at 42000.First three months visits same in American club where number of people visit same around 80000.
After that, they increased and stand out all time high is 99000, and after they decreased, which was 84000 in july.
To sum up, American club, which shows a handsome rise in last tow month
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... they increased and reached up to 78000.The most regularity is seen in the British ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: First
...visits decreased and stand out at 42000.First three months visits same in American cl...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63522012579 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28117291139 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1896048611 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.125 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114938566265 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519450565861 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635928542477 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698335965374 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622790541242 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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