The given diagram depicts how a salmon's life cycle commences and develops.
Overall, the whole cycle occurs in 3 different areas include rivers, estuary regions and oceans. Besides, the cycle starts with the incubation stage and then ends with the spawning one.
At the beginning stage, adult salmons lay eggs and incubate them underneath a river, then, these eggs emerge and the offspring salmons come to live. After the emergence stage, the freshwater rearing to estuary areas where they continue their migration.
Coming to the migration stage which mostly happens under the ocean, salmons in estuary rearing keep moving to rearing areas. The salmons grow and mature while continue migrating to spawning areas where they settle and spawn eggs to complete their cycle and also generate a new one.
In general, the life cycle of salmon is approximately a struggling and dangerous process as they must move to different regions through their growth and maturation period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'salmons'' or 'salmon's'?
Suggestion: salmons'; salmon's
The given diagram depicts how a salmons life cycle commences and develops. O...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, then, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30769230769 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39046704137 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9810551681 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237333288217 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106427784849 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855826544763 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144379762925 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680824120176 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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