The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph demonstrates the stages in the life cycle of a salmon, starting from birth to adulthood.
From an overall perspective, it is an eight-step cyclical process, four stages take place in the river while only three stages in the ocean and finally there is an intermediate stage that takes place in the estuary.
The starting point is when the adult salmon migrates from the ocean to the river's spawning areas in order to lay eggs, then it is followed by the stage of eggs incubation until the emergence of the hatchlings. In the next two stages, the small salmons start rearing first in freshwater then in the overlaping area between the river and the ocean, the estuary.
Once arriving the ocean, they migrate to rearing areas where they mature and grow into an adult salmon in order to return back to the river to repeat the cycle again and again.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...d grow into an adult salmon in order to return back to the river to repeat the cycle again ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 710.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70198675497 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38745166273 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556291390728 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.9073420291 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127347318855 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834396356247 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550488288489 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922236602346 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533180355183 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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