The process gives information about how sugar is made from sugar cane. Overall, the technique requires seven steps spread over various time lengths, beginning with preparing the raw material and ending with dry sugar being ready to use.
At the primary stage, sugar canes are farmed and nourished for 12 to 18 months. Next, farmers harvest them by using two different approaches: either manually or with special vehicles. After that, sugar canes are put into a huge juicer, which has two giant wheels on both sides. By rolling the wheels, a force is produced that crushes the canes, extracting the sugar cane juice. That liquid is later poured through a limestone filter to remove impurities.
At the fifth stage, the pure juice is poured into an evaporator that makes the liquid thicker by removing all the water inside it. As a result, people collect sugar cane syrup. To separate the sugar crystals from the syrup, a machine that turns the container round very quickly to produce centrifugal force is used. Finally, the crystals are taken into the last phase of drying and cooling and are ready to be used.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91534391534 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26594675825 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671957671958 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4320013373 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4545454545 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227404182448 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881861851314 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865210558497 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150079719065 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293672130346 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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