The diagram below shows the natural water purification system.
It is observed from pictorial representation about the information of natural water purification system. Furthermore, this process is divided into different stages, which is clearly and coherently represented and all these stages are performed in the chronological order.
It is crystal clear that the process takes place with the assistance of sun. In addition, there are three stones which are placed on the trench.The trench is kept on the mud. Also, there are two plants and container in pure water is contained, which are in the trench.
Firstly, Sun light falls upon the stones, which are upon the plastic sheet. Then, with the heat of sunlight the stones become hot, which create water. Next, this water condensed and flows into the trench. Afterwards, transpiration takes place with the help of plants. At last, condensed water converted into pure water and falls into the container.
Overall, it is evident that condensation and transpiration play part and parcel role in this process. Moreover, Sun also plays crucial role for providing heat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...e stones which are placed on the trench.The trench is kept on the mud. Also, there ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28402366864 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74813692775 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591715976331 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9006920332 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4166666667 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0833333333 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133804472459 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532581662968 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887761555574 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779549325546 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690306183485 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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