the given diagram shows the process of milk production in different stages for the food industries. As is presented in the diagram, milk production involves about 8 steps.
at the beginning, cows are kept at farms to graze on grass. Next, cows will produce milk daily thanks to the use of a special milking machine. Milk is cooled with the refrigeration store in the third step. After that, milk is delivered to the dairy by milk tanker per day. After the milk is pasteurized and packaged, these dairy products are delivered to shops and supermarkets.
the delivery process is the final stage of milk production and it is observed, milk production is a moderately complex process that required some predefined stages to make it deliverable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the given diagram shows the process of milk...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: At
...ilk production involves about 8 steps. at the beginning, cows are kept at farms t...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...e delivered to shops and supermarkets. the delivery process is the final stage of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 618.0 965.302439024 64% => OK
No of words: 125.0 196.424390244 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.944 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.34370152488 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80575408759 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 190.8 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4427987724 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.25 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46762082199 0.215688989381 217% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199126184328 0.103423049105 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140102809065 0.0843802449381 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.344683657288 0.15604864568 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134982651442 0.0819641961636 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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