The illustration giving reveals some information with regard to the stages of electricity production by ocean thermal energy conversion (OTEC).
As can be seen initially the sea water of the surface of the sea which has 29 Centigrade temperature directed to the line, and after that evaporated by solar energy and convert it to the Vapour. subsequently, the Vapour transferred to the evacuated evaporation chomper in order to desalinate. Having been desalinated, the saltless water vapour entered the turbine line to turn a turbine, which produced electricity. After twisting turbine, the vapour transferred by pipe to the condensing chamber which covered with a cycled pipe filled by cold seawater from the approximately depth of 1000 m from the sea with about 5 Centigrade temperature. the vapour was subsequently transferred its heat to the cold water and condensed to the purified water being drinking water. Having absorbed the heat of a vapour and the salt from the evacuated evaporation chamber, the waste salted water left the condensing chamber. In the end, this cycle repeated to create electricity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Subsequently
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30113636364 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02660700263 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573863636364 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1047340578 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.625 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.066211316991 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377688644017 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915402624762 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143069345082 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136071069475 0.0819641961636 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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