The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate the phases and equipment to make cement and the usage of cement in the production of concrete for construction.The production of cement has 5 steps, beginning with mixing the raw materials and culminating in the process of packaging cement.Making concrete involves mixing four main ingredients by using a concrete mixer.
First of all, limestone and clay are crushed and the powder of these two materials is mixed before the stage of rotating.Next, heated mixture is travelled over a conveyor belt. After that, the mixture is ready to go through a grinder.Lastly, the final product which is cement is packaged into bags and transported to another machine where it can be used in cement production
Regarding to the second diagram, the half of concrete consists of gravel which is small stones.The other materials used are sand, water and cement. All the materials are mixed together by using a concrete mixer which rotates the materials and produces concrete.
- The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- organizing a large family celebration such as a wedding can often create problems. what can be the problems associated with organizing a large family event and what solutions can you suggest ? 73
- The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...production of concrete for construction.The production of cement has 5 steps, begin...
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...ting in the process of packaging cement.Making concrete involves mixing four main ingr...
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...s is mixed before the stage of rotating.Next, heated mixture is travelled over a con...
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Suggestion: Lastly
...ixture is ready to go through a grinder.Lastly, the final product which is cement is p...
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...onsists of gravel which is small stones.The other materials used are sand, water an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, lastly, regarding, second, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25157232704 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98536175277 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.692755292 43.030603864 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 208.75 112.824112599 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.75 22.9334400587 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 5.23603664747 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290600501953 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15810144883 0.103423049105 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111075612114 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198320579485 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892412817857 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 13.2329268293 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 61.2550243902 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.3012195122 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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