The given diagram details the step by step procedure to produce cement by using multiple varieties of machines, which is further used to produce concrete as shown in the other picture. The whole process is discussed below in detail.
Looking from the overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the process passes through many stages starting from crushing the collected mixture and ending with the packing of cement to be used to create concrete.
According to the given illustration, first of all, the collected raw material as limestone and clay is crushed in a crusher to its powder form. Next, on the processing path, powder encounters a mixer before entering into a rotating heater, which is kept heated under the flame. Thereafter, the heated mixture produced in the previous step is ground in a grinder to produce cement as the final product. Finally, cement is stored in bags to be carried to produce concrete.
In the next phase, four different raw materials are mixed in variable proportions in a concrete mixer. To start with 50% of gravel(a mixture of small stones), the maximum of all the materials, followed next by sand that accounts for 25%, cement and water make up about 15% and 10% share respectively. In the end, once blended properly, we are left with the resulted product as concrete to be used for construction purposes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, first of all, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98678414097 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64325991043 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590308370044 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4277162627 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.2 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321698134835 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111313581282 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762991978913 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187073550898 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711393985148 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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