The diagram illustrates how cocoa beans are processed.
Overall, there are three major steps in this process, beginning with picking the beans and ending with the supply of various products to the consumer.
Initially, in step 1, the whole beans are picked, then the shells are removed before the beans are dried. The dried beans are pressed, producing cocoa liquor. Some of this is pressed again to produce cocoa cake, which is ground to make cocoa powder for sale to industry and then to the consumer in step 3. However, another product of the further pressing is cocoa, used by industry to make cakes and drinks.
Part of this cocoa liquor is not pressed further, but is refined in step 2. Next, sugar is added to some of the pressed cocoa to make industrial chocolate. This needs to undergo further processing to produce finished chocolate products. Finally, in step 3, these finished products are ready to be sold to the consumer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 101, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ined in step 2. Next, sugar is added to some of the pressed cocoa to make industrial chocol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83229813665 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34882820639 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55900621118 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0875365212 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220187488113 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981065528188 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384241004015 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144982228247 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382635239665 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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