The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The presented flow chart describes how water circulates in nature.
Generally, there are 3 main stages in the process, beginning with the vaporization of water and ending with its recurrence to the sea.
Turning into detail, the process commences when water, 80% of which stems from the sea, exposes to sunlight and forms vapor. This period results in cloud generation by the condensation of water vapor. Following this, rainfall is created when the water accumulation in clouds exceeds its limit.
In the next stage, there are two ways by which precipitation is treated. Firstly, water from precipitation may pour down and be accumulated in lakes. Another way is that along with melting snow, it contributes to the formation of ground water, which then flows back to the ocean in the presence of land’s impervious layer. Finally, the intrusion of salt water occurs as a result of the interaction between the ocean and freshwater aquifer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, then, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2012987013 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80204398566 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655844155844 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9733584671 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158328630147 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682503521617 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.01834046389 0.0843802449381 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915575208656 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242303442143 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.