This diagram depicts the procedure of bricks formation for construction purposes.
Overall, it is a seven steps process starting from digging clay from the ground. After passing this clay through several machinery, bricks become ready to be delivered to construction industry.
To begin, a giant digger is used to collect clay which is then filtered through a metallic grid. This filtered product is then rolled in order to convert it into finer particles. After this, sand and water is mixed with them and the final amalgam is either passed through wire cutter or a molder. This step brings brick into appropriate shape.
Once the bricks have been modeled, the next step is to allow them to dry for 24 to 48 hours in drying oven. After sufficient drying, further processing is done in a kiln that is capable of providing with intense temperature. In this kiln, bricks are baked up to 870 to 1300 degrees. However, a cooling chamber is also part of this furnace where a sudden drop of temperature is used to do advanced processing. After 48 to 72 hours of these cold therapy, bricks finally come out ready to be delivered. They are then transported to construction sites for consumption.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun machinery seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some machinery'.
Suggestion: some machinery
...ground. After passing this clay through several machinery, bricks become ready to be delivered to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86699507389 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.644480699 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625615763547 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8612855216 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.0 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124720513886 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454887764795 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317800584469 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857509829212 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382723502243 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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