The diagram show the stage and equipment used in the process of cement making and how cement is used to produce the concerte for building purpose
The given graphical representation reveal the information about the process of the cement and concrete manufacturing by some necessary equipment and materials it is disnict into four steps it is clear and coherent representation
To begin with the process of cement production of material used; limestone,clay. However it is introduce into crusher for crushing after that powder the materials into which mixture furthermore induce into the rotating heater for rotating process moveover take before the blend is actually dropped on grinder while the product obtained from the process cement as a by product
Secondly in concrete production mixing the all mixer ;sand,clay.however into four stages in a beaker after that due to this process concerte product also obtained from it
Overall it is the evident of cement and concrete manufacturing;four stages ,and into concerte process it in clock wise direction takes place in. However through these processes as a by product is obtained from it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , clay
...t production of material used; limestone,clay. However it is introduce into crusher f...
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Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ction of material used; limestone,clay. However it is introduce into crusher for crushi...
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Line 2, column 96, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'introduced'.
Suggestion: introduced
...ial used; limestone,clay. However it is introduce into crusher for crushing after that po...
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Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , clay
...te production mixing the all mixer ;sand,clay.however into four stages in a beaker af...
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Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t and concrete manufacturing;four stages ,and into concerte process it in clock wi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k wise direction takes place in. However through these processes as a by product...
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Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in. However through these processes as a by product is obtained from it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, however, second, secondly, so, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42580645161 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13849583199 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561290322581 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 22.4926829268 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 221.752614916 43.030603864 515% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 280.333333333 112.824112599 248% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.6666666667 22.9334400587 225% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.6666666667 5.23603664747 509% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182851472665 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116050181086 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526319496473 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118955812699 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312446547923 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.0 13.2329268293 227% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 61.2550243902 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 10.3012195122 237% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.06136585366 131% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.4329268293 254% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.9970731707 204% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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