The diagram show the stage and equipment used in the process of cement making and how cement is used to produce the concrete for building purposes.
The first flow diagram illustrate the process of cement making and the second diagram shows show the how cement is used to produce the concrete for building
It can be seen that cement is made by using two main raw material , and the manufacturing process consist of three distinct stage to production of cement .
At the first stage of production of cement ; limestone and clay are together put into a crusher .It helps to break down the raw materials into small pieces . Next, this crushed material introduce to a mixer. In the mixer limestone and clay are easily mix with each other .Further the mixture of limestone and clay are sent into the rotating heater .In this step the material
is rotate and we are also provide the external heat .After that ,It shift into grinder and finally cement is ready and further it is pack into bags.
On the other hand, to produce the concrete for building . There are some required amount of the material which are used to produce concrete , 10% water , 15 % cement , sand 25% and 50% grave into concrete mixer .This mixer is rotate into clock wise direction which help to mix all the material easily and concrete is ready for use .
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...so provide the external heat .After that ,It shift into grinder and finally cement...
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...erial which are used to produce concrete , 10% water , 15 % cement , sand 25% and ...
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...oduce concrete , 10% water , 15 % cement , sand 25% and 50% grave into concrete mi...
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...nd 25% and 50% grave into concrete mixer .This mixer is rotate into clock wise di...
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...ial easily and concrete is ready for use .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77669902913 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26128855433 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.174938873 43.030603864 265% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.0 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.3333333333 22.9334400587 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 5.23603664747 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 31.0 1.69756097561 1826% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392072473105 0.215688989381 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199354691079 0.103423049105 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.21055177911 0.0843802449381 250% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260540606196 0.15604864568 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.228017096256 0.0819641961636 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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