The diagram shows how biofuel product called Ethanol is produced
The graph illustrates the process of manufacturing of ethanol biofuel.
The 9-step cycle starts with plants and trees growing using sunlight and carbon dioxide and ends with vehicles emitting carbon oxide to produce eventually ethanol biofuel.
This is achieved by turning trees and planets into ethanol that can be eventually used as a biofuel for conveyances that emit carbon dioxide.
The process begins with Wood growing by using energy which consists of sunlight in addition to carbon dioxide, overtime they will be harvested and then, they are transported to be placed into a particular machine that turns them into pellets after that the fragments will be processed to make a substance called cellulose.
At step 5, the cellulose is processed to make a material named sugar next, microbes will be placed into sugar resulting in ethanol biofuel which then will be used as a fuel for various vehicles, at the final stage the means of transport that uses the aforementioned biofuel will release a gas called carbon dioxide and the process commences again.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15028901734 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6140208521 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560693641618 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.953073822 43.030603864 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.2 112.824112599 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6 22.9334400587 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142348717226 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103540897674 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469900752738 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103540897674 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469900752738 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.2329268293 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 61.2550243902 60% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.3012195122 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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