The diagram shows how fruit is canned.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram shows how fruit is canned.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how fruit is canned. First the fruit is picked up by farmers. Then it is taken to the cannery in large trucks. When it is ready to proceed, the fruit is washed by a special machine. And every fruit is checked before storage and any poor quality fruit is rejected. after checking it, the fruit is stored in a cold area. Once it is canned, the fruit should be peeled and sliced. after the fruit is peeled and sliced, it is taken to the canning process. after that The cans are sealed with covers, and sterilized using a special hearing process, and they are allowed to cool some moments. after that the cans are labeled and placed in the storage. Juice or syrup is also added in some canned fruit products. The canned fruit is now ready to be dispatched to stores and sold.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rge trucks. When it is ready to proceed, the fruit is washed by a special machin...
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Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... When it is ready to proceed, the fruit is washed by a special machine. And ever...
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Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...and any poor quality fruit is rejected. after checking it, the fruit is stored in a c...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 398, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
... the fruit should be peeled and sliced. after the fruit is peeled and sliced, it is t...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 472, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...ed, it is taken to the canning process. after that The cans are sealed with covers, a...
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Line 1, column 607, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
... they are allowed to cool some moments. after that the cans are labeled and placed in...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 607, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... they are allowed to cool some moments. after that the cans are labeled and placed in...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 643.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37414965986 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09375775959 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544217687075 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2280828792 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.5833333333 112.824112599 47% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.25 22.9334400587 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163485070249 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799729673886 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115915217483 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163485070249 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 13.2329268293 40% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 61.2550243902 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 11.4140731707 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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