The process diagram illustrates how the insect named honey bee spend its life.
We can see that the life cycle of the honey bee consists of six distinct stages, and it usually takes between 34 and 36 days to complete this whole process.
At the first stage in the life cycle, female honey bees lay 1 or 2 eggs every three days. Next, after 9 to 10 days, eggs begin to hatch and baby bees are trying to drill out of them. This stage normally needs about 5 days, before the whole numphs completely get rid of eggs after 7 days.
The remain cycle begins with the nymph, which is an immature form of an insect. Nymphes need to moults 3 times to shed or lose old features, hair or skin to allow for new growth (takes 9 days). Then the young adults emerge, after about 4 days to maturity, they finally return back to the first stage of the life cycle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...letely get rid of eggs after 7 days. The remain cycle begins with the nymph, which is a...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'moult'.
Suggestion: moult
...ture form of an insect. Nymphes need to moults 3 times to shed or lose old features, h...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 268, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
... about 4 days to maturity, they finally return back to the first stage of the life cycle. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 695.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29012345679 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.9485162149 2.65546596893 73% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679012345679 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.5531948023 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.875 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272698368508 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1193368977 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115791407988 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188750364906 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103679846915 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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