The diagram illustrates the various stages in the life of a honey bee.
it is shown that it takes 34-36 days to form a complete life cycle of five main stages that a honey bee experience through from an egg mature to a mature adult insect.
The life of a honey bee begins when an adult female bee lay eggs, this happens every three days with 1-2 eggs each. The eggs then hatch into immature insects after 9-10 days. During the third stage, these nymphs moult three times to reach their mature stage. The first moult occurs 5 days after the incubation, then 7 days later for the second time and last time 9 days later. After each moult, the bee grown in both size and shed.
The bee, now as a young adult, continues to grow for 4 days to reach maturity and capable of laying eggs. The fully grown bee lay eggs and the cycles continue.
- The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee. 61
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- The charts show the main methods of transport of people travelling to one university in 2004 and 2009 Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 66
- The charts below show the percentage of water used by different sectors in Sydney, Australia, in 1997 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 84
- The graphs show enrolment in different colleges in the Higher Colleges of Technology in 1999 95
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 685.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33544303797 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.91324622985 2.65546596893 72% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620253164557 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9474925721 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1111111111 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27236878018 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134343936075 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14094909707 0.0843802449381 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230538553459 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131408095809 0.0819641961636 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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