The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee

The diagram illustrates the various stages in the life of a honey bee.

Overall, the cycle consists of 6 stages, beginning with female adults lay an egg and ending up with eggs are hatched and the nymph appears.

First of all, the cycle of the honey bee begins when the female adult lays an egg, typically lays one or two eggs every three days. After that, between 9 and 10 days later, each egg hatches, and the immature insect or nymph, appears. Next, during the third stage of the life cycle, the nymph grows in size and sheds its skin three times. This moulting first takes place 5 days after the egg hatches, then 7 days later, and again another 9 days later.

In the next stage, after a total of 30 to 31 days from the start of the cycle, the young adult honey bee emerges from its final moulting stage. Finally, in the space of only 4 days, it reaches full maturity.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, then, third, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 720.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39024390244 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.97044642948 2.65546596893 74% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0033480141 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192222524939 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100040191191 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141351497276 0.0843802449381 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169694909771 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163112762018 0.0819641961636 199% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.