The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the production of the Silk Cloth.
The first diagram illustrate life cycle of the moth, and second diagram shows steps involved in the formation of silk cloth. It is clear and coherent representation.
There are four main steps involved in the life cycle of silkworm; from eggs to adult moths. The process of silk cloth production consists of six steps; from selection to weaving.
At the first stage in the life cycle of silkworm, moths lay their eggs. After ten days later, they transform into larva, these larva feed themselves on mulberry leaves then, after four to six weeks larva starts winding themselves in silk thread which develope into complete cocoon after three to eight days. After sixteen days cocoon hatches and full grown moth emerges out of it.
For silk cloth production, selected cocoons are collected and then boiled. After boiling the cocoons are unwounded where each strand is nearly about three hundred to nine hundred meters long. Further, the strands are twisted which can either dyed and woven afterwards or woven first and then dyed susequently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...agram illustrate life cycle of the moth, and second diagram shows steps involved ...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this larva' or 'these larvae', 'these larvas'?
Suggestion: this larva; these larvae; these larvas
... days later, they transform into larva, these larva feed themselves on mulberry leaves then...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... cocoons are collected and then boiled. After boiling the cocoons are unwounded where...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09302325581 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31263840157 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4976237065 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316692697955 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121427118321 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137875449717 0.0843802449381 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203908976252 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130033800982 0.0819641961636 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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