The diagram shows the life cycle of silkworm and stages in production of the silk cloth.
The illustrated figures present the life cycle of the silkworm during 16 days starting with the mother who give birth to the insects as eggs and ending with the mature moth, respectively the process of silk cloth production. Overall, both pictorials are structured in five descriptive steps.
As the first given image shows, after e period of ten days the eggs become larvae and spend their time on mulberry leaf which is theirs source of food for around 4 or 6 weeks. In the third stage, they create silk threads shells and stay in this shape for 3 or 8 days. after this period they become cocoons, preparing for 16 days for the last stage of the cycle in which they finish as mature moths.
The second illustration sketch out the technical process of how silk clothes are making. The first phase is putting the larva in its cocoon form in boiled water. after this, it is unwind in order to have 300-900 metres long threads. Those are dyed and prepared to be weaved. after this, they are again dyed and this is how the process ends.
In conclusion, as it can be observed, the silk cloth production depends on the fourth stage of silkworm larva. they have to be carefully selected and used.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...form in boiled water. after this, it is unwind in order to have 300-900 metres long th...
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...ose are dyed and prepared to be weaved. after this, they are again dyed and this is h...
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... on the fourth stage of silkworm larva. they have to be carefully selected and used....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, third, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57943925234 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28458321465 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588785046729 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.07073170732 560% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.3290868765 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6666666667 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209255535762 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683339779514 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987163768415 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13452035846 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748780004828 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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