The diagram Shows the life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the production of the silk cloth.
The diagram depicts the stages in the life cycle of a silkworm and the process of producing silk clothes. It is a clear and coherent representation.
It can be seen that, there are four stages in the life cycle of eggs to adult moth. In addition to the process of silk cloth production involve in six steps, from silkworm cocoon to silk material.
As far as trend, at the first stage in cycle of a silkworm, and the moth lays in eggs. Apart from all these, around 10 day, silkworm larva hatch from the eggs; however, these larva feed on mulberry leaf (food), and than after four to six week. Furthermore, the larva become covered in silk thread. And finally takes between 3 to 8 days for a full cocoon to be produced.
Overall,it is evident that the silk production, a cocoon is first selected and the boiled in water; after boiling, the silk thread that makes up the cocoon is unwind, and then several strand are twisted together.At the fifth and sixth stages in the process, the thread can either be dyed and then cover into silk fabric, or it can be first waves, and then dye subsequently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this larva' or 'these larvae', 'these larvas'?
Suggestion: this larva; these larvae; these larvas
...orm larva hatch from the eggs; however, these larva feed on mulberry leaf food, and than af...
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Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...e larva feed on mulberry leaf food, and than after four to six week. Furthermore, th...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...y leaf food, and than after four to six week. Furthermore, the larva become covered ...
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Line 4, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... a full cocoon to be produced. Overall,it is evident that the silk production, a ...
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Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'unwound'.
Suggestion: unwound
...silk thread that makes up the cocoon is unwind, and then several strand are twisted to...
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Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun strand seems to be countable; consider using: 'several strands'.
Suggestion: several strands
...makes up the cocoon is unwind, and then several strand are twisted together.At the fifth and s...
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Line 4, column 213, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: At
...hen several strand are twisted together.At the fifth and sixth stages in the proce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, then, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50753768844 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40762783694 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557788944724 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.8407371971 43.030603864 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 5.23603664747 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333687837262 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145899512888 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144357741364 0.0843802449381 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24438126041 0.15604864568 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138648974315 0.0819641961636 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.