The diagram shows the procedure for the university entry for high school graduates. Write a report for a university or college lecturer describing the information.

The given flowchart reveals The information about how the high school students getS an admission into the university.It is a clear and coherent representation.
Having a quick look upon the provided data,it is lucid thatonce a student has finishedeith high school education ,getting admission into the university is the next step.At first student has to download the admission form from the internet and after that student has to be finish up with his /her document compilation.Secondly, you have to send your documents to the admistration office ,where your documents will be considered thoroughly.This procedure may take about 2 weeks.if a pupil gets provisional acceptance ,he/she need to submitt more documents to the authority .Furthermore if the admin has rejected the application form the candidate has to either cancel the application form or may apply forany other suitable course according to the resume.
Moreover,if the university has given the full acceptance to the student ,then the very next step is enrolment .After that he /she will have to choose the subject according to their wish.tmThe last but not leasy is to get registered with the principal of the university and finally the university door are open for the candidate ,he or she may get into the university

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s getS an admission into the university.It is a clear and coherent representation....
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...ving a quick look upon the provided data,it is lucid thatonce a student has finishe...
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...t has finishedeith high school education ,getting admission into the university is...
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...on into the university is the next step.At first student has to download the admis...
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...h up with his /her document compilation.Secondly, you have to send your documents to the...
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...our documents to the admistration office ,where your documents will be considered ...
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...documents will be considered thoroughly.This procedure may take about 2 weeks.if a p...
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...e may take about 2 weeks.if a pupil gets provisional acceptance ,he/she need to ...
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....if a pupil gets provisional acceptance ,he/she need to submitt more documents t...
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...pil gets provisional acceptance ,he/she need to submitt more documents to the au...
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... submitt more documents to the authority .Furthermore if the admin has rejected th...
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...ubmitt more documents to the authority .Furthermore if the admin has rejected the applicati...
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...ubmitt more documents to the authority .Furthermore if the admin has rejected the applicati...
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... the admin has rejected the application form the candidate has to either cancel the...
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... admin has rejected the application form the candidate has to either cancel the a...
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...ourse according to the resume. Moreover,if the university has given the full accep...
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...given the full acceptance to the student ,then the very next step is enrolment .Af...
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...nt ,then the very next step is enrolment .After that he /she will have to choose t...
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... ,then the very next step is enrolment .After that he /she will have to choose the su...
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...iversity door are open for the candidate ,he or she may get into the university
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, then, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23786407767 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15395413936 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587378640777 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 22.4926829268 302% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 247.511615889 43.030603864 575% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 359.666666667 112.824112599 319% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.6666666667 22.9334400587 299% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.3333333333 5.23603664747 560% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 1.69756097561 1178% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128065931547 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906466197498 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597762975138 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906466197498 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597762975138 0.0819641961636 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.6 13.2329268293 284% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.0 61.2550243902 -10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.51609756098 262% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 10.3012195122 301% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.3 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 8.06136585366 134% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 11.4329268293 267% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.9970731707 266% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.0658536585 280% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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