The diagram explains how to make recycled paper from old newspapers. Overall, the entire process takes about 26 hours, with less than 2 hours of actual preparation.
First, tear some newspaper into small pieces and put them into a bowl. Then, add 250 ml of water and leave the paper to soak for up to an hour. Next, using an electric mixer, beat the mixture for about 45 seconds until it forms a pulp. When it’s ready, pour the pulp into a shallow tray and add a further 100 ml of water. Mix it together by hand. Then, using a piece of mesh, carefully lift the pulp mixture out of the tray, allowing the water to drain. Next, open up an old newspaper and placed the pulp mixture inside. Then, use a rolling pin to press the paper down and force out any excess water. Finally, leave your new paper to dry in warm a place for at least 24 hours.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ess than 2 hours of actual preparation. First, tear some newspaper into small pi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, then, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27777777778 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07962404127 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654320987654 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.3932414667 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.0 112.824112599 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104435544456 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472584991632 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984196944824 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134105531561 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100558110938 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 13.2329268293 46% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.95 11.4140731707 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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