The provided diagram represents how recycled paper are created from used newspaper.
Overall, the process contained 9 steps which can be divided into 3 main stages namely, collecting, mixing and drying.
In the first step, newspapers are collected and needed to be teared into small pieces. The mixing stage begins with pouring a quarter of a liter of water into the bowl filled with those paper pieces. Leave the mixture for one hour before using an electric mixer to blend it thoroughly for 45 seconds. Transfer the combination from the bowl to a large rectangular tray. After that, a hundred mililiters of water is added and then completely mixed by hands.
In the final steps, a piece of mesh is used to lift the whole blend so as to drain the water. The combination then will be covered in a newspaper while being pressed down using a rolling pin to force out all the left water. The procedure ends with leaving the recycled paper after taking out the newspaper in a place with direct sunlight for an entire day.
- The bar chart shows the percentages of the UK workforce in five major industries in 1841 and 2011 96
- The charts below show the proportion of expenditure by students on average at one university in 2000 and 2010 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The table gives information about the number of deep mines producing coal in the UK between 1913 and 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relavent 11
- The diagram shows the process of making recycled paper from old newspaper Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and makes comparison where relevant 78
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for governments to impose higher tax on this kind of food To what extent do you agree or disagree with t 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e hour before using an electric mixer to blend it thoroughly for 45 seconds. Tran...
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Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...of mesh is used to lift the whole blend so as to drain the water. The combination then w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71508379888 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41914278255 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642458100559 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.2839838296 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.4 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10625195334 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437143168753 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473484108753 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817008676424 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481201451025 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.