the diagram shows the process of making soft cheese.
The flow chart illustrates how soft cheese is made through many stages.
It is clear that this process is relatively complex with six main stages. In particular, it begins with mixing between water and milk and ends at making soft cheese.
At the beginning of the production of this process, water is mixed with milk and put into a container. Next, this mixture is cooled at 5 Celsius in 2 hours. After that, salt is added to this mixture.
At the fourth stage in the process, they are fermented by heat at 35 Celsius in 2 hours. Following this, while they are heated at 100 Celsius in 8 hours, water is evaporated through a steam hole. Finally, the final products are separated according to 2 ingredients, namely soft cheese and wastewater, and then soft cheese is cooled at 5 Celsius in 8 hours.
- The government should control the amount of violence in films and television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this issue? 61
- The table below shows the changes in the percentage of people joining in seven different sports in a European country from 1999 to 2009. 67
- the table below shows the proportion of income spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998
- The tradition that family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts? 56
- Many people say that family is the most powerful influence on a child’s development. However, some people suppose that other factors (such as music, friends,…) have a great influence on children.” Discuss both views and give your opinions. 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, then, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 661.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62237762238 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54091657275 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58041958042 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5985684757 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4444444444 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151512880366 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653069210663 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650320420003 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102035961781 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699480372143 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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