The diagram provides information about how electricity is produced from water which is stored in a hydroelectric dam.
Overall, a hydroelectric dam consists of various parts and machinery which simultaneously work together inorder to generate hydroelectricity.
To start with, water is stored in a reservoir behind the dam and whenever there is a need for the power production, the water is released from the reservoir and passes through the penstock into the turbine below the dam. Just above the turbines is where the powerhouse is situated. It is the main area where the electricity is generated from water using the help of turbines and generator.
To continue, turbines below the powerhouse start rotating in a circular direction with high speed for electricity to be generated from water. The remaining water flows into a river and finally gets merged into a sea or ocean. Now, the hydro power produced is transmitted from the generator in the powerhouse to long distance power lines through high tension cables. From there, electricity is distributed to various parts of the country.
- Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne The maps show the town s development over a period of time Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words 78
- Missions to explore space are hugely expensive and there are problems on Earth which demand attention The number of these missions needs to be reduced Do you agree or disagree 78
- The diagram shows the production of hydroelectricity 73
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 50
- Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student s field of study 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...art with, water is stored in a reservoir behind the dam and whenever there is a n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00962642859 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.9371551385 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0532983692306 0.215688989381 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268750393196 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550149134931 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604688384692 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691271551246 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.