The diagram illustrates how an Australian town is collecting rainwater and further using it for drinking purposes. Overall, the whole process tells us about the treatment of rainwater using water filters and further removing chemicals making it suitable for daily consumption.
Initially, the rainwater which falls on the rooftop is collected by cylindrical pipes which are attached on one side of the house navigating its way down to a drain at the bottom . It is then directed towards a water filter system which removes major impurities and outlets the filtered water to a storage tank.
Going forward, the filtered water is then moved to a water treatment tank in which it is again processed to remove any remaining and infectious chemicals which still may reside and not visible to naked eyes. The treated water is then transferred using pipes and supplied to neighboring households where it can be used for drinking as well as daily consumption.
- The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950
- The diagram shows rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town 89
- Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it could causeproblems. Do you agree or disagree? 84
- The diagram shows rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town 78
- The line graph below shows the consumption of a range of foods per person in Australia between 1939 and 1999 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 82
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ng its way down to a drain at the bottom . It is then directed towards a water fil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, still, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13461538462 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77338620854 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628205128205 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6793452052 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361321656843 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197596790031 0.103423049105 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.19137472782 0.0843802449381 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25236185654 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165713778163 0.0819641961636 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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