The flow chart illustrates each step of how to produce smoked fish on a small scale.
According to the figure, the first step of making smoked fish is to prepare fresh fish as materials, and the fish are killed by a knife. After that, the fish is put into a pot; at the same time, salt and water are added to it. After a period of about half an hour, the preparation work is finished.
Afterward, the fish is steam in a double-layer steamer for 5 minutes, followed by the most significant step, smoking. Additionally, the equipment that is used in smoking is a bucket. The wood is on the uppermost layer, and the fish is below the wood. At the bottom of the van, charcoal generates considerable smoke to smudge the fish. Besides, brushing oil on the surface of the fish can make it look more delectable. The final step before transporting the product is packing that food carefully.
- The diagram below shows the multistage production of pears as canned fruits Write a report for a university lecturer the process below 56
- The diagram below shows the multistage production of pears as canned fruits Write a report for a university lecturer the process below 61
- The diagram shows the small scale production of smoked fish 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 727.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54375 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64574392894 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61875 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.4962787477 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.7 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304048295337 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107434981938 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843998998807 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216916604067 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611781960937 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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