The diagram illustrates how cocoa beans are manufactured.
It is clear that there are 3 main stages during the procedure. The process begins with choosing the cocoa beans, and ends at the final products to sell to customers.
At the first stage, after being picked up from the cocoa trees, whole beans are shelled and get ready for pressing and drying process. Next, those cocoa beans are pressed to make cocoa liquor which then experiences one of two approaches, further pressing or further refining.
In the further pressing approach, the cocoa liquor is continued to be pressed to
make cocoa cake and cocoa. Then, the cocoa cake is also going through a grinder to make the cocoa powder. Subsequently, the cocoa powder are displayed in the supermarkets for making cakes or added in drinks such as coffee capuchino or hot chocolate.
In the further refining approach, the cocoa liquor is refined to reach the industrial chocolate, and the sugars and pressed cocoas added in this step. After that the finished products are manufactured. Finally, they are consumed in the shops and supermarkets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 151, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and pressed cocoas added in this step. After that the finished products are manufact...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04945054945 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63012399479 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2536536563 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5454545455 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335310954904 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129673375168 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942669855659 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180860500155 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940219111938 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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