The line graph compares the mean monthly wage of Japanese and the prices of non-color, and colour TV over a period of 20 years.
It is noticeable that the average salary of Japanese every month went up significantly, whereas the two types of TV prices experienced a dramatic plunge between 1953 and 1973. Moreover, the cost of black and white and colour TV was much higher than the monthly salary of Japanese during 1953 to 1963.
In 1953, the price of black and white TV was sold for 100 thousand yen, which was the highest figure. However, that of non-colour TV decreased steadily over 15 years, from 100 thousand yen to 40 thousand yen. Subsequently, the price of this type of TV continued to fall gradually at around 38 thousand yen in 1973, which was smaller than
that of colour TV, at about 90 thousand.
At the begining of period, Japanese people only earned approximately 30 thousand yen once a month. This number continued to increase rapidly by 150 thousand yen from 1953 to 1973, which overtook the price of color TV in 1968, In 1973, the mean income of Japanese in one month was at 180 thousand yen, which was higher than the cost of both types of TV, at about 38 thousand yen and 90 thousand yen respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58181818182 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51409251163 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490909090909 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.6088160456 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29864574155 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165274817582 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480967783564 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188794937553 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703004597444 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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