The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen meat pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
From the data in the diagrams we can see that processed meat pies contain vegetables like carrots, potatoes and peas in addition to meat. Prior to production, the ingredients are delivered to the factory. Vegetables are delivered up to 2 months before being used in production and kept in storage, whilst meat used in pies is delivered up to 2 weeks beforehand, and is kept refrigerated until use.
Before inclusion in the meat pie, potatoes are washed and prepared, then boiled and left to cool until use. Meanwhile, meat that has previously been defrosted, is similarly prepared. First, the meat is seasoned with salt and pepper. Excess fat is then removed and the meat is cut into small pieces.
Once the meat has passed a quality inspection control, the prepared meat is placed in microwaveable, plastic pie containers by factory workers on an assembly line. Pre-planned portions of peas and carrots are then added to the pie, followed by a portion of gravy. Finally, a layer of boiled potatoes is added on top. Assembly line workers next wrap the finished pie which is then frozen and stored in the factory or dispatched immediately.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, similarly, so, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92227979275 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75484972828 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575129533679 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9611402461 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3636363636 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0789298211574 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315733789353 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247483982189 0.0843802449381 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055080761332 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110897304468 0.0819641961636 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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